Monday, June 18, 2018

WALT Choose Words to Make Our Writing More Interesting

The Moon is like Mercury because it’s round and grey.
The Sun is like a fireball because it is very very hot.
Rory

Writing Reflection
I like to write about similes.
I am so proud when I write interesting sentences.

The next step for me is to practise using different similes.

2 comments:

Mum said...

Good start on similes Rory. I have noticed you practice them aloud at home.

Anonymous said...

Yes it is similar to Mercury in looks however there is definitely a huge size difference isn't there.